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alighting warm

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alighting warm

to know 
i see
the writings 
on the wall
a stepping stone 
in the right direction

as each stone 
comes tumbling down
you will begin 
to see me
as feelings grows
each stone 
warming in emotions
stumbles to the ground

in beautiful light
you enter 
my heart
forgiving the past 
letting you in
as within mends
beginning to get warmer
leaving the cold behind
i begin to see you

a light 
in the distance
with a glow 
warm and wanting
the loves 
back in my life
to sweep you 
off your feet

climbing over 
the wall 
like ivy
holding you 
a dream
an unbelievable 

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  1. Date: 12/12/2013 9:21:00 AM
    This is so so beautiful, Liam. Heart warming........You haven't posted for a while. I've missed reading your lovely poems. Hope all is well.

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 4:30:00 AM
    I love the way you describe climbing on the wall like Ivy..Just to behold one love.It shows determination and strength to get where you want to lead.

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 4:56:00 PM
    This is beautiful, Liam. Each stanza more poignant than the previous. Thank you for sharing it.