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Alcohol

Woe to the spirit of alcohol that twists and turns corrupts your soul woe to the darkness of your night with bitter thoughts your mind does fight woe to the child crying still that can not hear the words you knew with twisted thoughts inflicting pain the child lost your lovers flame As anger now begins to start woe to your lost lovers art whose pain I feel so deep woe to the silence of the night as angry words begin to speak woe to your lost lovers whose heart has turned to ice you drank away the love you lost each bottle has it's deadly cost you striped the flesh from lovers soul you empty nests that lovers hold an empty cage an empty nest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/19/2010 1:08:00 AM
Perfect climax. Love it!
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Date: 9/10/2010 10:41:00 PM
A well informed write, deep thougts to this one, loved the last stanza, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 9/10/2010 8:59:00 PM
I'll drink to that. The poem is nice. I like the first stanza the best. "with bitter thoughts your mind does fight", that's worth another shot.
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