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Against the Odds

There is a girl In a world Far away from here Where no fear Can ever be conceled. Her irritations are followed by cathartic absolution And even on the most stormy of nights, She glistens in the invisible, Shinning light. Her heart; Can see no wrong Her eyes; Brighter then the sun upon dawn She is what they all strive to be Perfectly catalized. In the depth of the sea, They chide and chastize Every move she makes, However she will never break And time after every melancholy time She astonishes even the unsurprised. Her charismatic way, Brings even the doomed back to life. Against the odds, she's shinning Even in the dark While shes crying You cant miss her spark Like superwoman No one can hurt her now She shines Returning hope back to this desolite town.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/7/2012 1:02:00 PM
Heartiest congratulayions Sarah on your your well deserved feature. Your writings are superb. -Mohammad
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry Sarah. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:20:00 AM
These are marvellous thoughts of hope. Keep on with such a good work. I loved it a lot! Love, Hanitra
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:30:00 PM
I like this poem very much. It is uplifting. warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 9/22/2012 4:09:00 PM
This is an amazing poem. I really enjoyed reading it. looking forward to reading more of your poems.
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