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After the Storm

mounds of snow piled high sun and clouds alternated snow squalls persisted!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2011 7:50:00 PM

Hey, I see you have quite a few haiku. I will peruse them to see if I've seen them yet or not. Thanks for wishing me luck in the contest with my Life's Sea, but guess what? I forgot to enter it in the contest. Either that, or cyberspace threw me out, and it made me so disappointed. I like this haiku about the aftermath of one of our great storms we have had recently!

Diane Christian

Date: 2/4/2011 3:53:00 AM

aww well writtten, i love snow LOL thanks for your kind comment God bless you from diane

Date: 1/16/2011 1:21:00 PM

Oh we have those mounds of snow here in North Dakota so I can relate to your words. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing. Karen

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/13/2011 9:00:00 PM

Beautiful description, of winter, reminds me of my youth, in England, enjoyed this. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/13/2011 3:36:00 PM

Now this I would love to see again, but there's not much snow in Florida, Carol. I really enjoyed the description of the sun and clouds alternating as the squalls continued. Saw Deb's note below and you should enter the contest if you're from outside the states. As for 3-D -- it's not for me. Love and best wishes, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/13/2011 2:55:00 PM

I'm having a contest to HIGHLIGHT poets from out of the USA please enter with the poem YOU like best of yours [any topic or form] The contest is called Foreign Exchange, just put the country you're writing from on the bottom! Light & Love

Date: 1/13/2011 10:01:00 AM

I forgot to rate it, so here is your rating.

Date: 1/13/2011 10:00:00 AM

Very nice! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, good work! Keep it up!