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After Life

As i sit in my room i think and think then i look over see the blade think of my life how much i hate it how much it sucks then i take the blade and slit my wrist then its over i cant change it its over im gone dead forever. Then, i see people all sad, like me i go over and talk to them, they seem nice, we have a lot in common we all commited suicide we all hated our life we were all, depressed we were in another life just not the real world a whole new world dead people everwhere almost like a spirtit of some sort and then we realised all of us there together for once in our life we were happy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/5/2011 5:35:00 PM
this is an intense poem. You have alot of talent. My only advice is for you to use more "Form" don't put "I don't know" no one will read it. goodluck julie
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Date: 2/5/2011 2:00:00 PM
Interesting.
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:01:00 PM
There really is no other life than the one you are experiencing right now. Your work is not that bad. I just hope you are not serious.
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