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Affects of Rejection

When your rejected, by the one you think you love It's like a spoken paragraph, without a bunch of fuss On the outside looking in, it's not the big a deal But when your inside, this is how it makes me feel I am not good enough, both past and future have been better Your lacking in something, and probably will be forever She's saying that all her old relationships, even the ones that were bad Are better then what me and her together would of had Your a dull seashell on the beach, that doesn't compare to the rest Left alone and discarded, better off thrown in the trash Will... your just not good enough, maybe I'll let you be my friend But since you are nothing, that's where our closeness will end That's why some guys respond with anger, how could you diss me so But me.. i just feel like I've been stomped to the floor Perhaps these feelings are dumb, but what am i suppose to think A failure once again, with tears hiding behind my eyes as i blink

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Date: 5/3/2013 8:09:00 AM
nice rhymes nd good writings of exceptional nd contents..
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William Hughes
Date: 5/3/2013 10:26:00 AM
Thank you.

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