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Adrift

No need for guided course to sail Adrift she moves upon a verdant sea With touch of mist and trailing vine The morning light a world unveils In solitude her thoughts fly free For now, a day of dreams sublime
10/28/13 Barbara Gorelick Senses for a Sestet contest

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Date: 11/10/2013 6:27:00 AM
Awesome winning work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:56:00 PM
I love this,Barbara...Awesome piece of work...Congrats on your superb win in this contest...
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Date: 11/9/2013 6:10:00 PM
I love the way yours glides off the tongue. One of the smoothest in the challenge,Barbara. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 10/29/2013 4:20:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..I looked at the contest but my head started back hurting again so I had to rest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 10/29/2013 12:13:00 PM
Lovely poem Barbara, I answered mail, I realized I have it finally. This looks like a fun contest, you did well.
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