Adjoining In the Sunrise

We climbed up a mountain, just he and I
      Never said a word, yet we said it all
      Wondering what it would be like to fall
As the sun lit up the now nearby sky
Lighting two figures who stood eye to eye
      Two hearts beat as one, two hearts beating true
      Beating together as the sky turned blue
We flowed down the mountain, just he, just I
The world waited for us to come down
      The flow seemed to stop, and he looked at me
      Touched my hand as we turned into the sea
Not caring as the worldly awaited us below
      We joined together as two, joined, may be
      Such innocence the world does not know


Copycat of "An Echo from Willow-Wood"
By Christina Rossetti

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/7/2013 9:30:00 AM
Well written poem! - Edward
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Date: 9/1/2012 10:19:00 AM
juli, congratulations in Joann's "copy cat contest" have yourself a great day.. ~LUV~PD
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Date: 8/31/2012 3:25:00 PM
Great work that you have penned..Good choice..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2012 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Copy Cat" contest Juli-. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2012 5:25:00 PM
oh my, ANOTHER stunning one. I am finding so many great poems as I read the winners' list. You captured such beauty and innocence with this one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/27/2012 1:02:00 PM
A well written sonnet. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:29:00 PM
Lovely sonnet enjoyed now. God bless you always, my friend, Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/12/2012 10:17:00 AM
Great job.
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Date: 8/11/2012 4:17:00 PM
Juli-Michelle this is a beautiful poem, love it. - Love sweet Love <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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