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Adjoining In the Sunrise

We climbed up a mountain, just he and I Never said a word, yet we said it all Wondering what it would be like to fall As the sun lit up the now nearby sky Lighting two figures who stood eye to eye Two hearts beat as one, two hearts beating true Beating together as the sky turned blue We flowed down the mountain, just he, just I The world waited for us to come down The flow seemed to stop, and he looked at me Touched my hand as we turned into the sea Not caring as the worldly awaited us below We joined together as two, joined, may be Such innocence the world does not know Copycat of "An Echo from Willow-Wood" By Christina Rossetti

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/7/2013 9:30:00 AM
Well written poem! - Edward
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Date: 9/1/2012 10:19:00 AM
juli, congratulations in Joann's "copy cat contest" have yourself a great day.. ~LUV~PD
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Date: 8/31/2012 3:25:00 PM
Great work that you have penned..Good choice..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2012 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Copy Cat" contest Juli-. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2012 5:25:00 PM
oh my, ANOTHER stunning one. I am finding so many great poems as I read the winners' list. You captured such beauty and innocence with this one. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/27/2012 1:02:00 PM
A well written sonnet. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:29:00 PM
Lovely sonnet enjoyed now. God bless you always, my friend, Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/12/2012 10:17:00 AM
Great job.
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Date: 8/11/2012 4:17:00 PM
Juli-Michelle this is a beautiful poem, love it. - Love sweet Love <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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