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Addicted

addicted!!! oh baby just addicted all other thoughts in my mind r restricted going insane day by day plz stop the game that you play I've surrendered all my ways more how much should i chase? I know there are some problems that you face. don't even know how i am passing my days my body breathes my body moves but i can feel no one around me i feel no world around me standing in middle of the road my whole world is slowed my eyes closed with all my memories disclosed just want to pass my days searching all possible ways just want to flow with the time want to move on baby it troubles.. more how long??

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Date: 7/19/2012 8:55:00 PM
Great writing. I liked the flow of it and love the use of "baby" as if speaking to someone, maybe even pleading with them.
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Date: 1/11/2012 9:19:00 PM
familiar thoughts
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