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Adam's Burden

Kneeling, rainsoaked in the Garden Begging for Gods pardon A low gutteral moan Emerges from his soul No longer whole Mankind stripped of his presence Because of his offence No more walks in the cool of the evening No more blessings from above, No more bathing in his love One apple One bite Doomed to walk alone at night Creation removed from glory's light. He feels his body in decay For letting temptation have its way Oh how he wishes it could all go away He sees the future thats now paved He wonders if his world can be saved This guilt he cradles to the grave But he sees a saviour in another age Who will rewrite mankinds page The single hope his kind will live He hopes one day they can forgive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/6/2013 4:41:00 PM
I love how you described the immense regret and sorrow Adam must have had after committing the first sin. He lost his fellowship with God and began to die physically and spiritually that day, along with the rest of creation. It doesn't end there though. You relay the hope creation has by the Savior. Thanks for sharing this powerful poem.
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Date: 12/5/2013 10:51:00 AM
Great testimony of your faith..Through one man's sin all men came uncondenation but through one man/God sacrifice upon that cross all men can be forgiven..Enjoyed reading this one today.Sara..I noticed that you stopped by my page..I appreciate your time spent there..
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