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Absolute Sinner

forgive me lover for i have sinned, i tasted all seven deadly sins: pride - when i dreamed that i deserved such a total love, greed - when i wanted you just for myself, wrath - when rebelling against your need for distance, sloth - when i prayed for my death instead of your life, envy - when others talk to you and you to them, but i just watch, gluttony - when reading each word of yours like the holy book, lust - whenever you're in my thoughts... so tell me, lover... would a lifetime of "i love you"'s be penitence enough?

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Date: 6/21/2010 2:59:00 AM
haha...I love the ironies here...full of contradiction yet so entertaining...great write....! ^_^ v
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