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Absence

Her heart lingers far Beset by constant turmoil Keeping its distance From other heartbeats and souls It withers away, it dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/24/2009 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful soothing flow of words. Your reader needs more tanka poem. Wishing you all the best.
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Date: 4/20/2009 3:08:00 AM
Lovely Yara nice one and thanks for commenting on my poem
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Date: 3/30/2009 6:50:00 PM
The heart is precautions, choosing which society to live in. Keeping its distance from emotions and feelings. But when a heart experiences no love, it withers away and dies. Lovely tanka. Enjoyed it very much.
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