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Above the Clouds

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Above the Clouds

The summer sky is such a pretty blue
above us, looking like a tranquil sea..
There are not many clouds except a few.
Up there with you is where I’d love to be!

I picture us both soaring to the sky
into that oceanic blue expanse;
above the clouds is where we ought to fly,
where, like two joyful angels, we would dance!

We’d spin about as if our feet had wings
that lightly touched on an unparalleled 
softness! And in my imaginings, 
I see us there with happiness unquelled.

Removed at last from earthly cares and crowds,
we’d stay in cool blue sky above the clouds.


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  1. Date: 12/5/2014 12:06:00 PM
    Hi Andrea, this is a lovely sonnet, such light and airy images of love above the clouds! Congratulations on your win. Sandra

  1. Date: 12/2/2014 2:40:00 PM
    Congratulations on your Andrea

  1. Date: 12/1/2014 9:29:00 PM
    Look at that another Sonnet that wows all your fans! Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 6:55:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 4:37:00 PM
    Ahh a fine sonnet! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 11:56:00 AM
    Many congratulations on such a lofty win - above the clouds! That's where I would love to be right now - high above it all! Beautiful win! Pandita

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 10:32:00 AM
    You are soaring high my friend - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 8:43:00 AM
    Congrats Andrea on a teasing glimpse of heaven.

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 7:22:00 AM
    Congrats on ur winning awesome write Andrea!

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 7:12:00 AM
    Congrats Andrea....love the angels dancing... Hugs Tim

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 12:59:00 AM
    ANDREA, Congratulations, thank you for the support. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 4:09:00 PM
    Soar on Andrea

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 2:47:00 PM
    A wonderful sonnet. I love all the lines from the beginning to the end. When I close my eyes after reading this poem I really feel free and calm...Bidhu.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Maybe this one inspired my Red Baron. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 6:51:00 PM
    Another of your loveliest sonnets. And filled with beguiling thoughts. - Red

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 2:24:00 PM
    May your world under the sky be filled with heavenly delights. Although a year can seem quite long, may you know joy tonight.

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 12:29:00 AM
    I have enjoyed floating on your most expressive write Andrea, however I nust warn you i have had to reprimand you in a particularly vicious manner on your response to my blog question you have answered on..I hope we may still remain on speaking terms 'however'..)

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 10:54:00 AM
    Beautiful imagination lovely penned, enjoyed a lot. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 9:07:00 AM
    beautiful:):):):):

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 3:49:00 AM
    Just one word..... wow! All the best for contest

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