About Life

About Life Life is not easy and that's a fact. We never know what's up ahead. We can't control - what we don't know. So we just try to go with the flow. We try so hard to be what we are not, to please someone, not knowing for what. Life is hard, I have already found out. I live in this world and that's no doubt. My life started when I was born, than it went on and on. Now at this point - what do I do? Do I keep going, or stay here with You?....
07/18/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: This is all that came to me today.

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Date: 7/31/2013 5:45:00 PM
hi sweetheart Lucilla..how are you.. so very nice to read your lovely poem....:) much luv and big hugs :) Sk
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Date: 7/24/2013 5:37:00 PM
I really like this. I really love the way it is written. Very wonderful.
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Date: 7/21/2013 2:46:00 PM
You do what ever your precious heart desires.. :o) Try to see how long you can carry a smile.
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Date: 7/21/2013 2:05:00 PM
choices, choices... a thought-provoking write with much sense, lucilla... wonderful!..:) huggs
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Date: 7/20/2013 2:30:00 PM
Well, can't you stay(with the person you are addressing) and keep going with your life too? this is nice, Ilene. I always enjoy seeing you here with a new poem.
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Date: 7/19/2013 9:56:00 AM
Good luck in the contest my friend. You done simply but very nicely. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/19/2013 7:39:00 AM
When people become who they aren't, they're not really living. I used to be that way a long time ago. That ended. Now, I've never been more confident about who I am and how I should be treated by others. It is why I call very few people a "friend". When we know our worth, the realness will value us the same. Wonderful piece! Smile on!
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Date: 7/19/2013 6:48:00 AM
- Beautiful about life, Lucilla .... I hope you will be here with me! - Have a relaxed weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/19/2013 1:06:00 AM
This is a deep thought my friend, a grand inspiration! I truly loved reading this dynamic poem this morning! What a pleasant and thought provoking piece, Great Work!!
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