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Abandoned Love

You abandon me on my teenage fore To be reminiscent of our virgin love To pang through the emotional lane Seeking solace in our thoughtful plain The words so rhyming were those scenes We lived through with emotions spleen Taking turns to hurt us more Were active mind ready to recluse Trust is a lie that we had learnt Walked our way through with an empty mind, Love we knew was something That drew us near but not within We loved the company and the bond That had no future we came to scorn We ridiculed the very nature Of two human in stature Spoilt the fun with little demands Made it costly for our ends The moments well spent still linger Regret moments that could have revived With love and love alone to survive The first embrace and the smudgy kiss Those made us learn many to miss The long walks along the moonlit shore Paving way to buoyancy more Clinging on the spirit of love Could never imagine it will be a phase To think back with love and haze You lead me through the love lost arch To abandon me on the no trust mark Still it aches to know I loved you more I couldn't take it I fell to my knees. The high price of innocence fleezed You left me on the bridge of park Standing to know that your love is quack The first crush is always a demeanor one has to learn to live with as it never matures the way we think the way it would…..sunkan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/3/2011 6:27:00 AM
oh carol what a comments how did u enjoy your holidays dear welcome lovely first comment on this new year here...sunkan
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:18:00 AM
What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Sundari. Love, Carol
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