Abandoned Love

You abandon me on my teenage fore To be reminiscent of our virgin love
To pang through the emotional lane
Seeking solace in our thoughtful plain
The words so rhyming were those scenes
We lived through with emotions spleen

Taking turns to hurt us more
Were active mind ready to recluse
Trust is a lie that we had learnt
Walked our way through with an empty mind,

Love we knew was something
That drew us near but not within
We loved the company and the bond
That had no future we came to scorn

We ridiculed the very nature
Of two human in stature
Spoilt the fun with little demands
Made it costly for our ends

The moments well spent still linger
Regret moments that could have revived
With love and love alone to survive
The first embrace and the smudgy kiss
Those made us learn many to miss

The long walks along the moonlit shore
Paving way to buoyancy more
Clinging on the spirit of love
Could never imagine it will be a phase
To think back with love and haze


You lead me through the love lost arch
To abandon me on the no trust mark
Still it aches to know I loved you more
I couldn't take it I fell to my knees.
The high price of innocence fleezed
You left me on the bridge of park
Standing to know that your love is quack


The first crush is always a demeanor one has to learn to live with as it never matures the
way we think the way it would…..sunkan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/3/2011 6:27:00 AM
oh carol what a comments how did u enjoy your holidays dear welcome lovely first comment on this new year here...sunkan
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Date: 1/3/2011 5:18:00 AM
What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Sundari. Love, Carol
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