Abandoned Church

In the midst of this silent song,
Is a lost note-a lost church...
Worst than being abandoned,
It's foundation  has been crawled by isolation...
The melodious rhymes it made,
Has been replaced by a never ending moaning of the ocean...
The sands crapes into it veins,
Going sway..
It was a place filled with saved souls..
A place of inspiration,
Tunes into a place of isolation..
Left and abandoned by all,
The place of worship has turned into "abbadon".

 

BY PRINCE EKPEMANDU
contest- THE CHURCH NY THE OCEAN
2nd October 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/22/2014 12:24:00 PM
Hi Prince Ekpemandu, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by to view, every featured poem, on the soups Home Page. Take Care & Have Fun this coming week..... Luve Linda
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Date: 10/8/2011 12:37:00 PM
This is very good. I've read several of your poems, you have your own language to speak your soul. Good one. I enjoyed them. Thanks for stopping by, prince :)
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Date: 10/2/2011 3:47:00 PM
A mesmerizing write, Prince. I love the way you described the decay of the church, even though it was a "place filled with saved souls." Now I'll have to look up "abbadon." Intriguing! Best wishes in the contest and thanks for stopping by. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/2/2011 3:54:00 PM
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