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A Wolf Story

The journey was rough, the road was long Her withered face radiated, turned in song Still she fought, her faith was strong She had no power, but she knew they were wrong She turned her face towards the breeze She heard them shout, she didn’t dare to breathe Opening her mind, she sent a silent message to the sky Please, dear god, don’t let me die Before they reached, her creaky tree Something made them turn and flee Climbing out to have a peak No hero, no human did she seek But on the waters edge she heard a growl A lone wolf was on the prowl Thank you, she whispered bowing to the ground But the wolf if it heard, gave no sound Off it stalked, in between the winding tree No one she told, no one would believe Everyday she would thank the grace, For her saviour with a different face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/14/2011 6:02:00 PM
Congrats Crystal on your poem making it to first round competition in PS contest luv.. good luck..
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Crystal. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2011 5:22:00 PM
Congratulaions on getting your poem featured! I really like the flow of your poem. The rhyming of your poem does not sound monotonous and I love that about your poem.
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Date: 7/29/2011 12:42:00 AM
This is lovely, Crystal, a lot of depth. Would love to read a re-write with more poignant syllables replacing words like "the", "a", "it", "to", "was", "were", etc.
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Date: 7/25/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Crystal. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/24/2011 8:43:00 PM
Congrats Crystal on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful one to share with luv..
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Date: 12/28/2010 9:20:00 AM
A wonderful piece of poem, I am one person who would like to be heard by you. You have a nature's gift and your muse seems to be quite active, Crystal
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Date: 12/28/2010 9:03:00 AM
A beautiful poem. It Inspired how majestic life and hope are. Made me feel protected by grace. Jeff
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Date: 12/28/2010 8:56:00 AM
i really like it because for one it is left unread except for me and it was beautiful. to be unheard when you so need and want to be heard so bad is a shame. there r so many poets out there that just need to be listen to. to understand what it feels like to not be noticed for there own poems. i for one am one of those people that will listen to the ones no one else believes in. because i to am one of those people that no one hears.
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