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A Winter Night

It was a winter's night and the moon wasn't too bright,
i kept walking with my coat held tight.
I kept my pace as life is a race.

Pacing through the cold breeze, i realized that life isn't easy,
i still kept my pace even when i was dizzy.
i came across a lot of obstacles and even stumbled,
but i stood on my feet as i remembered.
that night whenever i was in fear; 
i thought it's phase it'll pass with a tear

I wanted to make a mark and clear away this dark
so i still kept my pace as life is a race

my feet were freezed perhaps due to the cold breeze
i kept my pace till i make eveyone believe

I longed and yearned for the warmth of embrace but
Alas! i had to run cuz life's like is a race
and i had to make haste as i might loose this race

I'd love to be and longed for a place
where the world is a better and place not merely a race.

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  1. Date: 5/21/2012 8:10:00 PM
    First of all Aditya welcome to Poetry Soup and I hope that you will soon feel right at home here. I love your poem and know what you mean. Life often seems like a race. I found that you have a few typo's and spelling errors but when you have fixed those this will be one wonderful poem. TLee

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 11:52:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Aditya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol