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A Whole New World

On the day when I was born, I opened my eyes, cried with fright, and saw the new world. It was the day of happiness of father and mother. From that day until now, the past ten years, I learn and see the whole new world in front of me...............

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Date: 1/22/2016 9:28:00 PM
Winchaya Ieumwananonthachai, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 3/24/2013 2:06:00 PM
Dear Winchaya, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM " A Whole New World" in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest Days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. Superb Free Verse. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 3/19/2013 10:24:00 PM
Winchaya, , your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/12/2013 8:15:00 PM
I'm just eleven years old. Please tell me if I wrote or spelled anything wrong. :)
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