A White Prince On a Black Horse

A white prince on a black horse Galloping down beaten path Shouldering the blunt of force Of incoming rain Never looking back to see Where it was he’s coming from A delicate price, with pride Firmly going on Soggy trip to the ocean To go splash on each wave Both man and beast meld as one Heading to their home
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/10/2012 3:16:00 PM
Both man and beast meld as one melt/meld...as one love love the feel of this...write. blessed
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Date: 12/10/2012 1:46:00 PM
Russell, this poem is terrific, it reminds me of one of my dreams, well done, so happy I read it today. Constance
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Date: 12/10/2012 1:11:00 PM
love this, Russell. Thanks very much for your kindness, my friend - yes, I'll renew my PM - I just mentioned it was expiring as Debs wanted to know if we were PMs or not for the contest.
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:08:00 AM
Almost like a fairy tale prince, Russell. - A very well written poem. - Thanks for your visit and comments on my Christmas poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
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