A Wedding Day Rose

A wedding day rose pale in dress 
'twas as fair as the maiden bride.
Vanity’s breath in two hands caressed;
tendrils warily pruned, implied.
Quiet beauty bequeathed filled with pride. 

Budding flower in light cascading, 
veiled imitation none could foresee.                                                     
Blushing petals fall, brittle and fading. 
Sunset bore weeping groom’s last decree.
Then into darkest night, he did flee. 

A wedding day rose in graceful frock
shall charm all attendees eternal.
Apart from the bud with thorny stalk, 
head silently rotting internal.
Dewdrops cloud o’er the earth infernal.


By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 10/11/13
for Giorgio Veneto's The rose (Allegory) Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/23/2013 9:08:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:58:00 PM
lovely win Rhonda, congrats...LINDA
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Date: 10/16/2013 3:52:00 PM
Exceptional rose.... could be a song... it has created a music of its own Archontoula
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Date: 10/16/2013 2:22:00 PM
This is a gorgeous poem, Rhonda! Very deep and emotional. A beautiful write! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you very much for the kind comments.
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Date: 10/15/2013 4:52:00 PM
This work is awesome!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/15/2013 3:35:00 PM
Ohh this is great ..It just took me there ! you are a winner !
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Date: 10/15/2013 1:43:00 PM
Well written verse. Congrats!
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Date: 10/15/2013 1:04:00 PM
Wonderful! Congrats on your big win. BG
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Date: 10/15/2013 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on the first place win the contest.Rhonda
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Date: 10/15/2013 2:11:00 AM
Extremely beautiful and lovely poem this is my dear friend Rhonda. Thank you so much for sharing! My big hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Cheers! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/14/2013 9:04:00 PM
I loved the budding flower you created in this delicate piece. A true beauty this is! Congratulations to you, Rhonda!
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Date: 10/14/2013 8:44:00 PM
Well done, indeed....congrats on your win.... Jake
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Date: 10/14/2013 8:25:00 PM
beautiful poem ...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/14/2013 5:37:00 PM
congrats on a great win Rhonda....
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Date: 10/12/2013 5:11:00 PM
I'm not quiet getting the whole picture? Maybe another quatrain, the meter flows nicely!! verse 1 is the literal rose aye? 2 is the young bride? 3 is simply the sun rising on a new day? Did I get it? Light & Love
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Date: 10/12/2013 3:51:00 PM
this has a very classy feeling. I just know that giorgio is going to flip!!
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Date: 10/11/2013 11:10:00 PM
Very deep and full of inner feelings more so with fine rhymes, Rhonda
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Date: 10/11/2013 10:43:00 PM
This poem shows a great internal meaning all throughout it! It showered me with awe by your grandiose words! I truly enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/11/2013 8:56:00 PM
I am SO glad to be reading your poetry again Rhonda...I could be way off base here but to me, this has a rather sad, eerie feel to it...Almost like a faded picture from long ago...'Vanity's breath' is absolutely LOADED...From your friend and fan - Tim
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