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A wall between

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A wall between

Loves call awaits me

    Or perhaps it is knocking

        What if I answer

            Once opened finding no one 

                Only a wall between us

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  1. Date: 2/23/2011 10:43:00 PM
    oh, wow, I could SEE the wall as I got to the end of this one. Love it.

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 12:43:00 PM
    Smile ~ Such amissfulness in regards unto, "Your Beauty;" please forgive myself and, I love this beautiful painting my dear; sooo lovely and of course, "A Beautiful Fave; 'Just Like You!!!'" ~ love, Always, christopher ~

  1. Date: 2/23/2011 12:30:00 PM
    Smile ~ I do not believe that there could Ever be but a wall between, "Sooo Much Beauty As, 'Your Beautiful Self' &, The Heart That Loves 'Your Sweeetness My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Lovely Sharon Ruebel!!!'" ~ I Am regretful for having taken so long to return a humbled reply unto, "Your Majestic Light," in regards to SoupMail but, I cannot access its moment my dear yet, this is no excuse so, I Am sorry for ~ cont:)

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 8:22:00 PM
    Love always conquers all, dear Sha. Sometimes it takes a little longer but it does. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 6:03:00 PM
    If that call is genuine the wall will crumble itself,Sharon.Nice Tanka you have penned here.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.----kashinath

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 4:46:00 PM
    beautiful thought well expressed with images, very visual, shar

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 3:44:00 PM
    Miss Ruebel !Tear down that wall!''' ;) nice poem Sharon

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 2:44:00 PM
    This is a decently written tanka. You have posed an intriguing question here.