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A Vigil

Gray filtered light struggles earthward, stealth forgotten Random paths sought, discovered, not otherwise trodden Lazily zephyrs seize tired leaves off dying limbs, locked In wildly changing patterns Swirling, whirling, twirling, shaken, often a partner taken Potpourri of Nature's warning, trapped in a frantic dance Silence as the storm approaches, dark tendrils, icy menace Born of power, bold of purpose Light crashes as day's dawning, red sky screams it's notice life forms scurry. The heavens open. Clouds burst The watcher lifts her eyes Screams a welcome at the sky, caught up in the fevered cry Bound to the fury of the storm, reaches up, as though to fly Greets the rain, as a lover, lies in the very bed the wild made I am truly alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/9/2013 3:02:00 AM
- Hi Ray, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:56:00 PM
Ray, your first poem is excellent -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"
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Date: 6/25/2013 2:19:00 AM
WOW !! This is a really well written prose with so many intricate analogies. Keep posting.. you have talent.
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Date: 6/24/2013 10:42:00 PM
Very powerful imagery, and smooth internal meter; great writing, I hope to see more of your work!
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