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A View From Above

The rain falls down
As the angels cry
Teardrops from heaven
Through darkened sky

Rolling thunder
From breaking hearts
Rips their heavenly
World apart

They watch from above
At things that we do
Do they cry for me?
Do they cry for you?

The world is living
In a saddened state
Maybe they cry
For seeing our fate

How can we stop it?
What can we do?
Can you tell me?
Cause I can't tell you

Peace is the answer
To the questiion we ask
The next is just how
To fulfill the task

Just look to the heavens
And you're sure to know
The Angels that cry
Want to be our heros

Rockman  :-)

For "Holding Out For A Hero" contest by: Janette Fisher

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  1. Date: 6/3/2012 8:00:00 PM
    This poem comes rushing toward the reader and in a moment it is over! This was beautiful ...Samia

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 9:28:00 PM
    Maybe we should shoot all those that insist on war :) Another poem that tells a great story with perfect rhyme4; oh how that draws me in!

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Very nice dear poet.

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 12:00:00 AM
    Beautiful written poem Rockman. - Wish you good luck in contest. - Have a lovely day to you. - oxox Anne-Lise