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A Veil Softly Floats

Waterdroplets like diamonds bright Reflected by morn's sun Glisten 'pon the tender Maple Then sun behind cloud runs The fog has covered the forest Wrapping in a damp coat Cool garment of moisture surrounds Like a veil softly floats

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/23/2013 6:26:00 PM
Oh, I like this Sara ;} I think I should try writing more like this,,,, though not sure that I'm as good as you ;} Pitch perfect dreams is mostly made - up ;}
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Date: 6/19/2013 8:11:00 PM
This is such a beautiful and wondrous write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/19/2013 4:19:00 PM
'A veil softly floats'...Beautiful title for an equally beautiful poem, Sarah...Thanks for sharing this - Tim
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Date: 6/19/2013 3:13:00 PM
floating like magic, Sara. How are you feeling today? I hope things are starting to look up for you. I hope this for me and Joe too!!
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Date: 6/19/2013 2:42:00 PM
wonderful and misty...I love it. BG
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