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A Trip to the Dentist

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A Trip to the Dentist

I went to the dentist today,
And the fee that I had to pay,
For one little tooth,
Was highly uncouth.
It's highway robbery, I say!


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  1. Date: 3/13/2015 5:03:00 PM
    Great piece!!! Thanks for the smile today!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:36:00 PM
    An excellent limerick with a truthful message! Dentists are expensive! Very expensive!...Milt

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:23:00 AM
    Hi Kim,maybe you should try with a pliers first and see how it goes and give me update when you're done.I'll bring along some painkillers after.Smiles :)

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:22:00 AM
    Aint that the truth I with you my friend well said

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 11:36:00 PM
    they get ya in the hip pocket too:)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:41:00 PM
    Makes you want to pull a pair of pliers out of the drawer and do the deed yourself...It would be less painful than paying the fee...Hilarious! - Tim

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 11:46:00 AM
    Yes it is Kim, we should all use the old fashion method, the string and door method, Smile, or not ! xxx

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 11:43:00 AM
    lol But just imagine if there were no dentist i mean,lo..otherwise well written piece, loving it!!...luv Godwins

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 1:44:00 PM
    Sometime's life is like pulling teeth. Until there's none left to bequeath. When that day comes I'll have my say. Because that dentist won't get no pay.

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 3:19:00 AM
    Hello! Kim - Tis true Tis Tis, Nice one here! Noone wants to go for that reason alone. made my day! Perry C.

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 10:49:00 PM
    Vera good and cleverly written. Makes a point Peter

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Prices are unbelievable!! Very clever and hits home! Thanks for stopping by.

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Hahaha! Yep, those dentists extract everything they can, not just teeth!

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 9:58:00 AM
    So cute, and I looked down and saw Deb had the exact same thought!!

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 7:08:00 PM
    nice one, kim! (and so true!)

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 2:03:00 PM
    - Next time, I'll be there to hold your hand. - Sweet limerick, Kim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 12:57:00 PM
    So cute and so true! Loved it Kim! love,Deb