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A Trip Out Of This World

walkway to the stars
kaleidoscope nebula
milky way beckons

by Carol Fillmore
for Rick Parise's contest: Haiku Beyond (Nature Only)

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  1. Date: 4/6/2011 7:40:00 PM
    good piece of poetry

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 10:42:00 AM
    Love this, great win Carol:))

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 9:13:00 AM
    Wonderful Haiku!Congrats Carol on your big win!---kashinath

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 10:10:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, CArol!

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 6:08:00 PM
    !!Congratulations on your 6th Place win in the contest, Carol! Beautiful view you captured from the picture! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 2:44:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 12:53:00 PM
    What a great trip you took us on.....a winner indeed!! :) Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 12:42:00 PM
    Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Rick, Carol

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 12:40:00 PM
    I see the winnerrs are posted now, Carol. Congrats again! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 12:17:00 PM
    Congratulations Carol on your sixthplace win...excellent haiku!! Good to see you in the top six. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 11:57:00 AM
    Congrats Carol on your wonderful win in Rick's contest my friend.. with this elegant entry of beautiful words to denote photo luv.. enjoy your top spot where the air is as rare as your lovely words ... thankxx for your sweet comments today.. Nurse "Sweetheart" is getting a work out as hubby is still feeling poorly ..TLC time..luv..

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 7:40:00 AM
    CLAP clap for garnering a big win in this contest, carol... CHEERS all the way..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 7:22:00 AM
    Congratulations Carol on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/27/2011 7:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. I sent you Soup Mail that will let you find out where you placed even though the "contest winners" link is broken. Check it out and have a nice evening. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 3:40:00 PM
    Very nice, Carol, especially the "kaleidoscope nebula" line. It's easy to imagine it that way and the Milky Way beyond beckoning us onward. I have RSVP'd but need to know where the happy couple have registered their gift preferences. LOL Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 3:23:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winning one for sure..Enjoyed reading it..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Far Away View"..Sara

  1. Date: 3/24/2011 2:19:00 PM
    Oh, I really liked how YOUR bridge was a walkway to the stars. Mine was lover's leap. hahaha. This is awesome!

  1. Date: 3/24/2011 8:12:00 AM
    Wonderful approach to the contest photo Carol.Thanks for your kind comment at my page---kashinath

  1. Date: 3/24/2011 8:10:00 AM
    A fabulous title Carol complimented by wonderful words to express the photo for the contest.. good luck my friend... this is incredible insight especially kaleidoscope nebula..awesome luv.. thankxx again for your encouraging words too..

  1. Date: 3/24/2011 6:59:00 AM
    I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Carol and I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol