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A Tide or A Pool

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A Tide or A Pool

The photo album speaks a story, A life full of esteem and glory. Put in chronological order Might have been a psychological disorder. A frail pale body You could picture it in your head. Tall maybe his height But his hands were red. From being his parent’s imperfect boy To being his class’s imperfect student, Didn’t make much difference to him Except for messing of the ingredient. He adsorbed pride But insecurity found vestibule. From outside he was a tide Within he was a dirty pool. Succeeded in making followers, Who praised and supported when he fell weak Would pick on every other innocent Had the idea that this would hide his streak. Dying, crying, fighting and lying, The tails tried their best to suffice But when the reality dawned on the retinue They had already stepped on the precipice! Fell with their master and burst on the floor Traits evaporated from within the core. Followers produced devotion Master was all about commotion.

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  1. Date: 6/9/2013 4:49:00 AM
    Nicely composed story Shivam.I like it.

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 10:51:00 AM
    i don't understand whom are you portraying, and clarity is required here, but then some of the gist i could fallow