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A thirsty soul

Like a thirsty soul,
waiting for a single drop of water,
like a patched land,
waiting for the first shower from above,
so is my soul lifted up in earnest anticipation.
Yes, I see a ray of light behind the cloud.
I see the dim light forming a shape.
I just wish, yes, I wish,
that this becomes a full moon


8th Dec, 11

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  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:14:00 AM
    Seeing this one again. It's REALLY good, Modupe. One of your best!

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 7:16:00 AM
    Thank you for your comments! God bless you! JP

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:02:00 AM
    I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today Modupe. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 7:42:00 PM
    I really am enjoying your poetry.

  1. Date: 8/10/2012 12:23:00 PM
    I love how you ended this one, wishing for a full moon, the fullness of your dreams.

  1. Date: 8/9/2012 11:05:00 AM
    The moon indeed is a mysterious planet that perhaps give life as much as the sun . Moon and sun should ballance life.