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A Tear That Is His

That same raindrop catches me either in the sun or shade... The clouds look all the same but for a few that won't fade... The taste of a tear is always on my tongue... A salty spice from a cry not sung... I look up to Heaven to see who it is... My unborn child , a tear that is his... written by Michael J Falotico for Falling Raindrop contest sponsored by Carol Brown

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Juniper Lock

Date: 10/14/2012 5:58:00 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful..JuniperL

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/2/2012 7:01:00 PM

CONGRATS MICHAEL LUV ON A WELL DESERVED FIRST PLACE WIN.. JG ALWAYS ENJOYS YOUR MAGNIFICENT EXPRESSIONS .. MISSING U .. XOXO

Debra Falgout

Date: 9/1/2012 8:43:00 PM

Congrats on you win Michael, have a wonderfull day, love debra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 11:13:00 AM

Michael, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/30/2012 7:19:00 PM

Nicely done Michael and congratulations. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/30/2012 4:45:00 PM

I too think the souls of unborn children are UP there [nod] in Judaeism it's called the Guff [I think] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/30/2012 3:57:00 PM

I am touched by this heartfelt outpouring of words. You are not alone. I, too, taste a tear. Congrats on your win, Michael. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/30/2012 2:16:00 PM

Michael, such a beautiful poem, and so sad. Well done. congratulations on your win. Lee

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/30/2012 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations Michael this is a heart tugger and a super win xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Michael. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/20/2012 8:06:00 AM

A very sad and heartfelt write, Michael. I didnt know u kept the pain behind your happy and romantic words. You're one of the God's toughests.

Cory Long

Date: 8/17/2012 10:13:00 AM

Soup Mail buddy... cory

Don Johnson

Date: 8/16/2012 3:37:00 PM

very touching of the heart mate...well done ..

Kash Poet

Date: 8/16/2012 2:04:00 PM

Such a heartfelt poem by you Michael..Enjoyed the read.Thanks for my placement in your contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2012 1:35:00 PM

oh so sensitive and tender.. I know how it feels Michael luv.. still dealing with my own demons luv.. best wishes .. thankxx for choosng my entry as a winner.. blowing a big smoochie to u.. luv..JG in healing mode..xoxo

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/16/2012 11:07:00 AM

Oh, how sad this poem is Michael! My heart goes out to you my friend! What a powerful and ingraining write! What a lovely piece! Great Work!!

Cory Long

Date: 8/16/2012 10:28:00 AM

this was a beautiful write.. I have enjoyed it greatly.. Thank you for being there :) cory

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2012 9:30:00 AM

Dear Michael...a very sad touching poem....stopping by to wish you luck... tag you as soon as I get home...xox...pd