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A Tear That Is His

That same raindrop catches me either in the sun or shade...
                            The clouds look all the same but for a few that won't fade...
                                        The taste of a tear is always on my tongue...
                                                A salty spice from a cry not sung...
                                             I look up to Heaven to see who it is...
                                               My unborn child , a tear that is his...



                                                      written by Michael J Falotico
                                                                         for
                                                         Falling Raindrop contest
                                                        sponsored by Carol Brown

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2012

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Juniper Lock Date: 10/14/2012 5:58:00 PM Breathtakingly beautiful..JuniperL Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/2/2012 7:01:00 PM CONGRATS MICHAEL LUV ON A WELL DESERVED FIRST PLACE WIN.. JG ALWAYS ENJOYS YOUR MAGNIFICENT EXPRESSIONS .. MISSING U .. XOXO Login to Reply

Debra Falgout Date: 9/1/2012 8:43:00 PM Congrats on you win Michael, have a wonderfull day, love debra Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/1/2012 11:13:00 AM Michael, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 8/30/2012 7:19:00 PM Nicely done Michael and congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/30/2012 4:45:00 PM I too think the souls of unborn children are UP there [nod] in Judaeism it's called the Guff [I think] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 8/30/2012 3:57:00 PM I am touched by this heartfelt outpouring of words. You are not alone. I, too, taste a tear. Congrats on your win, Michael. Love and Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 8/30/2012 2:16:00 PM Michael, such a beautiful poem, and so sad. Well done. congratulations on your win. Lee Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 8/30/2012 12:42:00 PM Congratulations Michael this is a heart tugger and a super win xx Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/30/2012 11:55:00 AM Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Michael. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 8/20/2012 8:06:00 AM A very sad and heartfelt write, Michael. I didnt know u kept the pain behind your happy and romantic words. You're one of the God's toughests. Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 8/17/2012 10:13:00 AM Soup Mail buddy... cory Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 8/16/2012 3:37:00 PM very touching of the heart mate...well done .. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 8/16/2012 2:04:00 PM Such a heartfelt poem by you Michael..Enjoyed the read.Thanks for my placement in your contest. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/16/2012 1:35:00 PM oh so sensitive and tender.. I know how it feels Michael luv.. still dealing with my own demons luv.. best wishes .. thankxx for choosng my entry as a winner.. blowing a big smoochie to u.. luv..JG in healing mode..xoxo Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 8/16/2012 11:07:00 AM Oh, how sad this poem is Michael! My heart goes out to you my friend! What a powerful and ingraining write! What a lovely piece! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 8/16/2012 10:28:00 AM this was a beautiful write.. I have enjoyed it greatly.. Thank you for being there :) cory Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/16/2012 9:30:00 AM Dear Michael...a very sad touching poem....stopping by to wish you luck... tag you as soon as I get home...xox...pd Login to Reply