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A Tasty Blend

Our lips meet moistened
                                              Each others ingredient
                                                 Blends to perfection

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/21/2012 10:12:00 PM

Michael, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/7/2012 10:49:00 AM

a true blend this is, love this poem...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/29/2012 9:33:00 PM

perfection is so hard to find these days Michael luv but your fantastic words prove there is hope .. JG in low ebb mood these days .. thankxx for my win in your great contest luv ..xoxo a million more too ,,

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/29/2012 7:58:00 AM

ahhh but what does she taste like..this is senryu you can use metaphor! Light & Love

Constance La France

Date: 11/28/2012 7:25:00 AM

Michael, a romantic well done senyru, you captured the kiss beautifully, Constance

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/27/2012 12:46:00 PM

hmmmm love the last line ;) awesome piece MJF! Love CTH

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 11/27/2012 3:29:00 AM

Oh wow...this is a gift - says it all - perfect like ying and yang - Thankyou - Shaz

Holly Moore

Date: 11/26/2012 8:41:00 AM

Oooh...nice write. Little steamy..Thanks for you comments on my poem "Strength"....Hugs, Holly

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/26/2012 5:39:00 AM

Hunger, a basic need met; exquisitly rendered with so few words. Luv, Lizzie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/25/2012 9:19:00 PM

Michael, wow perfect is.. perfect does.... one of the best senryu,,,passion at its best... always~ PD

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/25/2012 5:43:00 PM

I have a sudden urge for something hot, and for some reason I don't think it is coffee.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2012 8:23:00 AM

a delicious blend it must be, Michael!

Len Gasun

Date: 11/25/2012 7:31:00 AM

A very fascinating senryu you've penned Michael! It's perfect indeed! Congrats! More power and blessings to you and your family always! love/hugs, LG

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/24/2012 10:02:00 AM

Perfect! That's how I feel about this wondrous poem...It's purely perfect! I am amazed at your insightful and delightful ingredients into this fine write! What a powerfully fabulous piece! Keep up the awesome poems coming, it's nice to see you back into the fray of things! This is a fantastic write, Great Work!!

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/24/2012 9:50:00 AM

What a tasty kiss! :D, Beautiful senryu Michael, I love the closing of this senryu, it completes its perfection :D, Thank you for your visit to my new poem, it's been a while not seeing you around, and it's a pleasure to have you back :D, wishing you the most joyful and wonderful day Michael :) - Hug, Yanny

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