A Tarot Card

He chose the card 
And slowly flipped it over
An angel looked up at him:
Judgement

His health would get better
And his business would succeed

A fresh start

Now he must learn from all his mistakes 
And forget the past

But how he feared the future…

for Tracie’s Tarot card contest (the Judgement card)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/2/2013 5:33:00 PM
Great write,, and it won. I have a friend who does the tarot, Happy New Year Jack
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Date: 12/7/2012 6:50:00 PM
A write more closely allied with real life! Good on you! Congrad's on your fine write winning high honors. Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2012 2:43:00 PM
Jack, hope you are well... :- ) Congratulations with your awesome poem in Tracie's "...Tarot Poem..." contest.. glad these are enjoyable winners.. take care~LINDA
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Date: 12/7/2012 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's contest Jack. Love Carol
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Date: 12/7/2012 1:43:00 AM
Congratulations Jack, well done xx
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Date: 12/7/2012 12:50:00 AM
Way to go Jack!
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Date: 12/6/2012 11:56:00 PM
congrats Jack luv on a marvelous write on Judgement Tarot and a magnifico win too .. trying to catch up on poetry while working these hectic holiday season ..
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Date: 12/6/2012 8:51:00 PM
Congrats Jack ....nice read....Seren
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Date: 11/19/2012 10:55:00 AM
Great entry Jack. Good luck in the contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/19/2012 7:52:00 AM
Nice, mysical feel to this one. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/19/2012 1:21:00 AM
Well written Jack. I didn't know what to do in this one.
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Date: 11/19/2012 12:28:00 AM
bravo Jack luv .. on a perfect rendition of Tarot Judgement card .. such a precise view of choosing this great card in a reading .. winning wishes for a grand entry ..
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:34:00 PM
very interesting how you ended it. That he fears his success. Wow, that is profound, Jack. You did very well for the challenge, and thanks so much for seeing my several new poems today. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:17:00 PM
Ooh and angel passing judgement, I like that! Great write, pleasure to read! Hugs
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Date: 11/18/2012 2:01:00 PM
Whoa!! What a card to get..Great write about that card..Enjoyed reading it..Winner for sure..Good luck..Thanks for all the stops by my works..Appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Date: 11/18/2012 12:55:00 PM
This is quite the deep write my friend! I just love the powerfulness of this poem, the Judgement card! I suspect that fear would be used to the good of the future, not the bad! You have written a delightful poem Jack! I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! What fun Tarot cards can be when used appropriately! Great Work!!
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