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A Tarot Card

He chose the card And slowly flipped it over An angel looked up at him: Judgement His health would get better And his business would succeed A fresh start Now he must learn from all his mistakes And forget the past But how he feared the future… for Tracie’s Tarot card contest (the Judgement card)

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/2/2013 5:33:00 PM

Great write,, and it won. I have a friend who does the tarot, Happy New Year Jack

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/7/2012 6:50:00 PM

A write more closely allied with real life! Good on you! Congrad's on your fine write winning high honors. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 2:43:00 PM

Jack, hope you are well... :- ) Congratulations with your awesome poem in Tracie's "...Tarot Poem..." contest.. glad these are enjoyable winners.. take care~LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2012 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's contest Jack. Love Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/7/2012 1:43:00 AM

Congratulations Jack, well done xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/7/2012 12:50:00 AM

Way to go Jack!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2012 11:56:00 PM

congrats Jack luv on a marvelous write on Judgement Tarot and a magnifico win too .. trying to catch up on poetry while working these hectic holiday season ..

Seren Roberts

Date: 12/6/2012 8:51:00 PM

Congrats Jack ....nice read....Seren

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/19/2012 10:55:00 AM

Great entry Jack. Good luck in the contest. Love, Joyce

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/19/2012 7:52:00 AM

Nice, mysical feel to this one. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/19/2012 1:21:00 AM

Well written Jack. I didn't know what to do in this one.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2012 12:28:00 AM

bravo Jack luv .. on a perfect rendition of Tarot Judgement card .. such a precise view of choosing this great card in a reading .. winning wishes for a grand entry ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2012 6:34:00 PM

very interesting how you ended it. That he fears his success. Wow, that is profound, Jack. You did very well for the challenge, and thanks so much for seeing my several new poems today. Luv, Andrea

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/18/2012 6:17:00 PM

Ooh and angel passing judgement, I like that! Great write, pleasure to read! Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2012 2:01:00 PM

Whoa!! What a card to get..Great write about that card..Enjoyed reading it..Winner for sure..Good luck..Thanks for all the stops by my works..Appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/18/2012 12:55:00 PM

This is quite the deep write my friend! I just love the powerfulness of this poem, the Judgement card! I suspect that fear would be used to the good of the future, not the bad! You have written a delightful poem Jack! I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! What fun Tarot cards can be when used appropriately! Great Work!!