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A Summer Couplet

Cool breeze blowing as the hawk hovers around, Scared chicks scatter to hide,but no mother on ground. CONTEST:"A summer Couplet" sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 11:00:00 AM

loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/2/2013 12:36:00 PM

Whoa!! To those chicks..Great unique work for the contest..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/30/2013 2:59:00 PM

I liked this MORE because it was a different life view! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:25:00 PM

Olusegun. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"

Kash Poet

Date: 6/29/2013 1:59:00 PM

Beautiful couplet here Olusegun.Congrats on the win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/29/2013 1:38:00 PM

Oh dear........I hope those baby chicks find shelter...... This is nature and her fickle ways. What a great twist on Andrea's contest.......well done, and so unique!!

John Posey

Date: 6/29/2013 10:18:00 AM

Congratulations on a great entry....Jake

Goodness Lanre

Date: 6/29/2013 2:15:00 AM

Congrats. Gl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2013 12:39:00 AM

Hi, Olusegun, your couplet was sweet and unique. Congrats for your HM in my contest.