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A Summer Couplet

Sunlight bursts with softness in the summer Rays shine, basting all with something warmer Contest: LOVIN' SUMMER: A Summer Couplet Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich 6/11/2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:57:00 AM

loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 6/30/2013 10:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win friend Russell..It's a great write..cheers!! :) Have a good day always! :) Hugs, maria

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/30/2013 12:56:00 AM

So true! Congratulations on a fine win, Russell!

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:21:00 PM

Russell, yes warm and warmer..... Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"

Kash Poet

Date: 6/29/2013 1:28:00 PM

Congrats Russell on your win in the contest.Lovely couplet.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/29/2013 1:20:00 PM

Love the use of "basting" in your poem.......what a great metaphor that is!! Congratulations, Russell!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/29/2013 8:52:00 AM

way to go, Russell!! I thought this was so nice. Love that first line. Congrats to you.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/29/2013 7:36:00 AM

Congratulations Russell, a fine entry.

John Posey

Date: 6/13/2013 7:31:00 PM

Russell, this is exactly what a winning entry looks like... Jake

Kash Poet

Date: 6/13/2013 7:45:00 AM

Love this Russell!Very nice couplet.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/13/2013 1:08:00 AM

lovely Russell , you captured summer, we are still waiting in England xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/12/2013 12:40:00 PM

- Uplifting summer words, Russell ..... HERE: rain all week!! - Good luck in the contest! - Hope your summer will win! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/12/2013 6:51:00 AM

Very nice Russell, I also enjoyed your comment on Becca's poem. That was a poem within itself. I think you should turn it into an actual poem it holds so much poetic potential for expansion. Either way I enjoyed your words.

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/12/2013 12:43:00 AM

Nice couplet Russell ...Seren