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A Summer Couplet

Let's build a quiet fire beside the sleeping brook tonight and lie beneath the stars to watch the sparks rise out of sight. Written: 6/9/2013 For Andrea's "Lovin' Summer" contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:53:00 AM

loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/1/2013 6:27:00 PM

Heather a fabulous image with this summer couplet. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/1/2013 4:49:00 PM

lovely! congrats on your win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2013 3:30:00 PM

Ahhh!!! Romantic winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 6/30/2013 5:05:00 PM

very evocative, heather, as you invariably are, paints a lovely picture of a peaceful summer night, great rhythm and flow too, congrats on your win :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/30/2013 4:19:00 PM

Romantic and peaceful! Congrats on your win, Heather! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/30/2013 2:43:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/29/2013 11:42:00 PM

This is very lovely, Heather...Congratulations on a very fine win!

John Posey

Date: 6/29/2013 6:42:00 PM

I find your entry so captivating. Perfect in every way... Makes me crave marshmallows.... Congrats on a seriously crafted entry... Jake

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:02:00 PM

Heather,amazing. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Kash Poet

Date: 6/29/2013 1:12:00 PM

Congrats Heather on your win in the contest.Beautiful romantic couplet.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/29/2013 1:01:00 PM

Oh, I have done this very thing......as a camper, and an outdoor girl, I love a campfire at night......as the sparks light up the sky! Lovely vision.....lovely poem!! Congratulations!