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A Summer Couplet

Let's build a quiet fire beside the sleeping brook tonight
and lie beneath the stars to watch the sparks rise out of sight.

Written: 6/9/2013
For Andrea's "Lovin' Summer" contest

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:53:00 AM
    loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 6:27:00 PM
    Heather a fabulous image with this summer couplet. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 4:49:00 PM
    lovely! congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 3:30:00 PM
    Ahhh!!! Romantic winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 3:02:00 PM
    Congrats Heather on your wonderful winning couplet xxx

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 5:05:00 PM
    very evocative, heather, as you invariably are, paints a lovely picture of a peaceful summer night, great rhythm and flow too, congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:19:00 PM
    Romantic and peaceful! Congrats on your win, Heather! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 12:27:00 PM
    Beautiful! Congrats!

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 11:42:00 PM
    This is very lovely, Heather...Congratulations on a very fine win!

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 6:42:00 PM
    I find your entry so captivating. Perfect in every way... Makes me crave marshmallows.... Congrats on a seriously crafted entry... Jake

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:02:00 PM
    Heather,amazing. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:12:00 PM
    Congrats Heather on your win in the contest.Beautiful romantic couplet.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:01:00 PM
    Oh, I have done this very a camper, and an outdoor girl, I love a campfire at the sparks light up the sky! Lovely vision.....lovely poem!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 8:39:00 AM
    I should have known one of my favorites did this one. It's so lovely and romantic. Congrats on your win. Almost gave this number one spot!

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 8:23:00 AM
    young dreams. Congratulations on this memory. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:19:00 AM
    Oh, I like this a lot--You took us there--nothing like a campfire to smooth the mind and soul! Perfect

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:02:00 AM
    Very nicely done!! Very inviting!!! Congrats on your win...Jim

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 5:12:00 AM
    beautiful. congrats Rick

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:13:00 AM
    Lovely image Heather. Loved it....Seren P.s. loved the comment to Mandy, I did reply on it lol....S