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A Star's Scream

The vast expanse of darkness Was riddled with star-fire And comet fountains. Emptiness stared back When driven through disorder's border. And while each hollow breath Entangle with the cosmic shifts, The mind was set adrift To the distortions Of flexing lights. Faint glows you'd cast On that primal night, Sprayed like ice crystals And diamond glitters On spinning sheets of Gray dust clouds. The gloom of dawn unhinged, Disarmed.Unfolded: Succeeded where logic said "It shouldn't!" Let the tormented reign of groans Cover those blankness. Away in spaces where motion is Light years from letting go. Pain survives In borrowed Silence.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/14/2013 12:38:00 AM
Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. take care and good night :-) Hugs ~XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:59:00 PM
Dean, this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3
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Date: 6/26/2013 4:51:00 PM
Dean , CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for enjoying my contest...I had much fun in closing my contest called ... ""A week into my poem""- Take care and enjoy my blog if you like... have yourself a lovely day.... LINDA
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Date: 6/24/2013 4:32:00 PM
In interesting piece, which I believe would make an excellent subject for literary analysis ~ a lot of depth written in a fluid manner.
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