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A Starry Ocean Soaring

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A Starry Ocean Soaring

A harrowing plight.
Daunting mountainous questions.
Artist in me imploring...

I looked up at night
to witness God's creation,
and thought, these stars are boring...

No, this can't be right.
God has imagination.
Lifeless sky, I'm ignoring...


Now I see the light.
God speaks through my impression,
A starry ocean soaring.

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  1. Date: 12/10/2009 4:56:00 AM
    Interesting interpertation of Van Gough. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/27/2009 7:00:00 AM
    Beautifully penned. Loved it. Would you pls comment my poem-SevenComets...thankfully. Wishing you all the best.

  1. Date: 10/24/2009 10:55:00 AM
    You've captured the interplay between the artist and the universe beautifully, Yoni. Great write !!

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 10:55:00 AM
    Interesting write on the painting. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 5:40:00 PM
    An awesome write, man. Inspirational, and creative. Sincerely,Moses

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 5:34:00 AM

  1. Date: 10/10/2009 8:31:00 PM
    Congratulations to you for this beautiful piece being recognized! Wonderful piece you've created. Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 5:13:00 PM
    What an inspirational and creative poem. This is wonderful!!! Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is AWESOME!!!!!! Keep up the good writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 6:34:00 PM
    This is lovely! I love the introspection in here and the clarity that the speaker finally ended up with. Congratulations on your well deserved placement in this contest!

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 12:27:00 PM
    God sure is magnificent!! good piece :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 11:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placing in Abe's wonderful contest Yoni >> James

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 10:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 8:10:00 AM
    I love the personal twist you took your poem in Abe's contest! Congratulations on your original write! ~ love, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 6:02:00 AM
    wonderfully written, congrats on placing in the conrtest!!

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 3:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Abe's contest Yoni. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 12:38:00 AM
    Dear Yoni, To see the world through Vincent's eyes! Brilliant Choka! Love, lainie

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 9:29:00 PM
    As brilliant an intepretation as the painting itself, Yoni. Not surprising, talented friend! Congrats on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 8:41:00 PM
    Yoni, congrats on your success in Abe's contest...Raul

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 5:27:00 AM
    Very poetic Yoni,the description apt,I read with attention rapt....and did'nt find it boring:I hope in the contest too, it gets it's due,and the judges find it adoring.Thank you for your witty comments on my write,keep writing, warm regards, Prince

  1. Date: 10/6/2009 7:50:00 AM
    nice job, keep sharing, thanks for your comments on my works, it helps:)