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A Starry Ocean Soaring

A harrowing plight. Daunting mountainous questions. Artist in me imploring... I looked up at night to witness God's creation, and thought, these stars are boring... No, this can't be right. God has imagination. Lifeless sky, I'm ignoring... ... Now I see the light. God speaks through my impression, A starry ocean soaring. http://www.vangoghgallery.com/painting/wallpapers/starrynightwallpaper3.jpg

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2009 4:56:00 AM

Interesting interpertation of Van Gough. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 10/27/2009 7:00:00 AM

Beautifully penned. Loved it. Would you pls comment my poem-SevenComets...thankfully. Wishing you all the best.

Sue Mason

Date: 10/24/2009 10:55:00 AM

You've captured the interplay between the artist and the universe beautifully, Yoni. Great write !!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2009 10:55:00 AM

Interesting write on the painting. Keep writing. Sara

John Freeman

Date: 10/12/2009 5:40:00 PM

An awesome write, man. Inspirational, and creative. Sincerely,Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/12/2009 5:34:00 AM

beautiful,

Donna Golden

Date: 10/10/2009 8:31:00 PM

Congratulations to you for this beautiful piece being recognized! Wonderful piece you've created. Hugs, Donna

Date: 10/9/2009 5:13:00 PM

What an inspirational and creative poem. This is wonderful!!! Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is AWESOME!!!!!! Keep up the good writing. Karen

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/8/2009 6:34:00 PM

This is lovely! I love the introspection in here and the clarity that the speaker finally ended up with. Congratulations on your well deserved placement in this contest!

Joshua Lacey

Date: 10/8/2009 12:27:00 PM

God sure is magnificent!! good piece :)

James Fraser

Date: 10/8/2009 11:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your placing in Abe's wonderful contest Yoni >> James

Corinne Curcio

Date: 10/8/2009 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/8/2009 8:10:00 AM

I love the personal twist you took your poem in Abe's contest! Congratulations on your original write! ~ love, Carrie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2009 6:02:00 AM

wonderfully written, congrats on placing in the conrtest!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2009 3:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Abe's contest Yoni. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 10/8/2009 12:38:00 AM

Dear Yoni, To see the world through Vincent's eyes! Brilliant Choka! Love, lainie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/7/2009 9:29:00 PM

As brilliant an intepretation as the painting itself, Yoni. Not surprising, talented friend! Congrats on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/7/2009 8:41:00 PM

Yoni, congrats on your success in Abe's contest...Raul

Prince Freakasso

Date: 10/7/2009 5:27:00 AM

Very poetic Yoni,the description apt,I read with attention rapt....and did'nt find it boring:I hope in the contest too, it gets it's due,and the judges find it adoring.Thank you for your witty comments on my write,keep writing, warm regards, Prince

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/6/2009 7:50:00 AM

nice job, keep sharing, thanks for your comments on my works, it helps:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2009 6:01:00 AM

I am sure I missed so many amazing poems this past weekend. I enjoyed reading yours today Yoni. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol