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A Spring Day

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A Spring Day

Spring encapsulates all the things I dream of;
Flowers in bloom, what a heavenly sight
while being lulled by fresh rain that I love.
Breathing in sweet scents from morning ‘till night
elevates and inspires my soul to take flight.

Spring shares enchanted birth with the earth,
while butterflies flit from flower to flower.
Accomplice to this season’s musical mirth,
bird songs echo from bower to bower
as the glorious sun rises hour by hour.

All hues amaze against a myriad of green.
Daffodils and tulips rise from their sheltered sleep.
A time to be thankful for this peaceful scene
for rebirth in abundance my faith runs deep,
to all of God’s blessings each one of us reap.

May 6, 2014

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  1. Date: 6/8/2014 7:43:00 AM
    Good morning Connie, thank you for the lovely words on my Eden poem.... The imagery on this poem's amazing. Spring brings out the best in Mother Nature....SKAT

  1. Date: 6/5/2014 4:59:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..Way to go.Congrats ..Sara

  1. Date: 6/2/2014 1:52:00 PM
    soothing the senses wit your impeccable ianguage, connie.. congrats on your fine win and huggs

  1. Date: 6/1/2014 4:40:00 PM
    This took me to the early morning just before sunrise when the birds have beaten us to the punch. Their joyful songs high in the trees celebrate the joy of springtime for God's little creations. I love your choice of flowers (which are fairly independent of mankind) to illustrate your quintain. From smells, to sounds, to sights, a well-organized tribute to Spring. Congratulations

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 6/5/2014 6:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    What a welcome and beautiful comment you left for me Reason. I truly appreciate the time you took to write it. Your poetry is always admired by me. Mahalo (Thank you) and Aloha, Connie
  1. Date: 5/31/2014 3:21:00 PM
    Your use of rhyme pattern, colours, sight and sounds make this poem so very rich. Congrats on a fine win, Connie! // paul

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 6/5/2014 6:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Paul. Your comment means a lot coming from such an accomplished poet as yourself. It is much appreciated. Mahalo, Connie
  1. Date: 5/31/2014 6:40:00 AM
    Beautiful write Connie..Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 5/31/2014 1:55:00 AM
    Lovely poem on the Spring. Congrats on the win, Connie

  1. Date: 5/30/2014 11:50:00 PM
    congrats on your win Connie, beautiful entry

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 5/31/2014 3:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for my high placing as there were so many really lovely entries. I bet you had your hands full trying to decide. You did well! I enjoyed learning how to write a Quintain!
  1. Date: 5/30/2014 7:31:00 PM
    So true we must enjoy each season thoroughly each is a gift! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/30/2014 5:42:00 PM
    Glad to share no. 4 with such a great entry. Congratulations Connie. Love, Joyce

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 6/5/2014 6:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your poetry is a favorite of mine, as you most likely know Joyce. I am honored to share number 4 with you! Thank you. Love, C
  1. Date: 5/30/2014 4:53:00 PM
    Connie, lovely poem..."for rebirth in abundance my faith runs deep, to all of God's blessings..." Amen! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 5/30/2014 4:08:00 PM
    Connie, a very special poem you have here. Congrats on your fine win !!

  1. Date: 5/30/2014 4:06:00 PM
    Dear Connie, I was wondering what spring is like in Hawaii. It seems to be much the same as in the continental states. Your descriptions of the birds, flowers and sense of "rebirth" are awesome. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 6/5/2014 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It is very much like Florida, but not quite as humid because of our lovely tradewinds. You can swim in the ocean in January, which is why tourists come from the cold to have fun and bask in our sun. Mahalo for your lovely comment.
  1. Date: 5/20/2014 4:01:00 PM
    Glad that spring has finally arrived! We had a rough winter here in NYC. Nice thoughts in this work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 5/11/2014 7:33:00 PM
    Connie that is a lovely write, I also love spring the only trouble is I get hay fever pretty bad but you have covered spring in that one lovely verse...Take care..............Vera................

  1. Date: 5/9/2014 4:31:00 AM
    Connie this encapsulates spring in its entirety, it is my favourite month, I miss your site and I wish I could post there again, hope you are well....David

  1. Date: 5/8/2014 1:36:00 AM
    Hi Connie. I love the spring, and this ode to it. Nicely done, my friend. Kudos. Peace and hugs...~M

  1. Date: 5/7/2014 5:42:00 PM
    You paint a lovely picture of Spring here Connie. As we head towards our winter here in Australia, it makes me quite envious. loved your poem, My friend....peter

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong
    Date: 5/11/2014 5:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you much Peter. Since you are approaching autumn down under you might enjoy my "Autumn Gold" poem. I used to spend 4 days out of each week in Sydney for over two years. I love Australia, what I have seen of it. Went on the little train in the Blue Mountains and of course visited Zoo's. Lovely, the Taronga Zoo and more.
  1. Date: 5/7/2014 3:51:00 PM
    Connie, you so nicely rhymed this one. A real gem for the contest. Thanks for your several comments last night. It's so hard to keep up here!! Hope you will go to my blog and take my dessert quiz, or maybe you avoid those dang desserts, but I bet you still love them!

  1. Date: 5/7/2014 12:18:00 PM
    - Connie, a truly beautiful spring poem !!! - Good luck in the contest! - I love the spring :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)