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A Spring Day

A warm spring breeze caresses my face, As the sun beams down in delight. I walk through the park in spring's sweet embrace, Watching ethereal butterflies in flight. Oh! What a glorious sight. Flowers are abloom in every hue, A rainbow of fragrance dispersed. Trees resplendent with verdant view, And birds their melodies rehearse, Released from winter's curse. 2/6/12 Entered in Francine Robert's English Quintain A Spring Day contest Judged 2/25/12 2nd place

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Date: 3/7/2013 11:16:00 AM
Kim~ a nice wining poem....Yours truly *SKAT
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Date: 3/2/2013 8:55:00 PM
So glad to stop by and read this very beautiful poem of yours my dear friend Kim! I love it and I have enjoyed reading it this morning! An excellent write/quintain indeed.It'll go to my favorite! Thank you so much for sharing and MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FANTASTIC WIN! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/2/2013 6:12:00 PM
lovely write Kim...congrats on your win...
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Date: 3/2/2013 9:01:00 AM
This one just lightens the spirit on a cloudy spring day. Lovely piece, Kim!! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/1/2013 9:12:00 PM
KIM, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD
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Date: 2/27/2012 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your BIG win! Love, iolanda
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:29:00 PM
Congratulations Kim on your win. you paint a beautiful spring picture. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:20:00 PM
Wonderful images, Kim. Congratulations on your great win!!
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Date: 2/26/2012 1:28:00 PM
congrats Kim on a well deserved win for a brethtaking beauty..luv..
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:30:00 AM
Beautiful Kim Congrats xx
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Date: 2/25/2012 10:51:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Kim
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Date: 2/8/2012 3:58:00 PM
Good luck in Francine's contest..Read like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..The longing for spring has played on my heart but summer follows and it is very hot..Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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Date: 2/8/2012 2:21:00 PM
splendid portrayal of a fresh season, kim.. winning delight!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/8/2012 1:23:00 PM
Beautiful spring piece, my friend - reading it made me feel a little warmer : )
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Date: 2/8/2012 8:28:00 AM
I visualized your 'flowers are abloom in every hue'. An excellent imagination and words. Dinda :)
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:59:00 PM
You sure brought me along with you on that Spring day! Enjoyed this one and I loved how you described the butterflies and the "rainbow of fragrance" :D
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:32:00 PM
It's as delightful as a new spring day itself, Kim. Best wishes in the contest!!
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Date: 2/6/2012 11:30:00 PM
Nice imagery of spring here.Best wishes.
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:41:00 PM
this is a very soothing poem. nice work.
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