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A Spotlight Performance

In the spotlight she played on her flute.
Though she tried, her performance was mute.
The crowd heard not a note,
just a squeal from her throat
as they pelted her with rotten fruit.

Copyright © Sharon Tideswell

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  1. Date: 8/22/2010 10:41:00 AM
    Wow, what a shame! Very funny Limerick, Sharon! Loved the read this evening! Tank you for your kind comments and have agreat week!....Gert:)

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 8:16:00 AM
    Enjoyed this interesting piece of poetry you have written here. Also, will have to read more of your work as well. Have a great day

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 10:04:00 PM
    hahaha. It reminds me of those poor kids who get cold feet and can't play a note. Good one. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 6:43:00 PM
    Oh, how very clever! Poor thing, sounds like something from a nightmare- I can't seem to run in mine but no one pelts me with fruit past it's prime. This was fun to read :) Hugs, Kris

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 12:03:00 PM
    Aw, poor lassie, crowds can be so unkind at times. Kolio Limerick Sharon >> James

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 6:39:00 PM
    A nice hilarious scene you have penned, Sharon

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 10:35:00 AM
    oh poor sad

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 8:03:00 AM
    Great limerick, Sharon. Poor girl, she got a little too can happen to the best of us...Emily

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 7:15:00 AM
    I feel sorry for this girl, but still had to laugh, Sharon. We all get nervous sometimes. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 7:05:00 AM
    A super write Sharon.. if for any contest ..good luck.. enjoyed your rhyme .. as well.. happy week to u .. with luv from Italy..caio..luv..

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 6:13:00 AM
    Sad and disappointing time for the performer..Keep up the creative writing..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 3:22:00 AM
    Funny, but a fear everyone has to face when getting up before a crowd for the first time.

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 2:38:00 AM
    glad i didn't play in front of that crowd, awesome limerick Sharon, enjoyed the poem.