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A Spider's Intrigue

Sparkling all across the wisps of morning dew. Weaver spin on till your masterpiece is through. Dancing in the sunlight's rays-your web of white. Tantalizing beauty there is quite a sight. Stem to stem eight legs move onward into day capturing each water drop and luring prey. Soldiering on you leave your intricate design splashed across the leaves like cotton on the vine. Many splendored you are feared by some it's true. Transfixed I am watching to see what you'll do! for contest"Along Came A Spider" June 1st,2013

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Date: 6/24/2013 8:13:00 PM
Deb, lovely poem, capturing such a special moment, Deb, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/21/2013 11:24:00 AM
Creative winning work..Enjoyed reading this atternoon..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 6/20/2013 6:58:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/20/2013 6:30:00 PM
Congrats my dear. A winning write! BG
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Date: 6/20/2013 4:41:00 PM
Deb co granulation a on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/20/2013 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem Deb. i enjoyed. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2013 7:26:00 AM
Great congrats on your superb win, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/9/2013 4:06:00 PM
It felt like you were playing a symphony. Beautiful!
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Date: 6/8/2013 11:51:00 AM
Nice write about nature's little engineer. Good luck with it in the contest.
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Date: 6/3/2013 4:35:00 AM
- Hey Deb. - This is beautiful!! - It will come high up on the winning list - Good luck! - Have a beautiful day - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/2/2013 8:36:00 PM
very cute ;}
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Date: 6/2/2013 1:43:00 PM
Loved this one.
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