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a soul

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a soul

to bathe 
in the waters
of eternal life
silence within emotion
fluttering feelings
took one's
breath away

at the golden gates
one grail amongst gems
opens a treasure chest
joining together
two keys
to the chamber
two hearts 
shine one 

singing in the stars
trails of happiness
breathing souls
whispering emotions
in a cotton soft breeze
sparkling from deep
within your eyes
lighting up
a treasure

dazzled beauty
within the eyes
a mirror shining
one beautiful light
to kiss your soul
in saying
its you darling
the picture 
that hangs
in light


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  1. Date: 10/9/2013 11:54:00 PM
    romantic, liam......... enjoyed................SKAT

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 6:27:00 PM
    A very beautiful and heavenly picture that you have painted with your words. Wonderful poetry, Liam...Thank you for the kind comments, as always!

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 8:00:00 AM
    Liam.....if words could change the world....these would do it. Lovely