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A Song of Songs

on the verge of love, mutual discovery unveiled in their secret world; lips to lips ,sealed, hearts in passion pound ardour's whispers sound; need unchains desire, pleasure's fever fans a fire, each flame thrusting higher; in duet's crescendo choir realisation exceeds hope, promise, with trust elope; enchantment metamorphose as love,sublime,grows Note: a quatorzain is a stanza or poem of fourteen lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/28/2011 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "MIX" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2011 2:45:00 PM
This is one of the most romantic ones I have seen you do. I quite like it!
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Date: 11/27/2011 2:45:00 PM
oh, and I see it got a win with PD. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/26/2011 8:47:00 AM
Very nice Brian. Congratulations
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Date: 11/26/2011 1:55:00 AM
BRIAN, Congratulations on your wonderful win . I would also like to thank you for the support in my contest. I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving. Take care, and have yourself a great night,..xoxox~p.d.
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Date: 11/21/2011 6:08:00 PM
Captivating and a warm heartfelt read. You are very talented and it is with great pleasure to read you. Thank you for sharing And May God Bless!
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:12:00 PM
Beautiful Brian xx
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Date: 11/20/2011 4:19:00 PM
This pulsates with such beauty, Brian...one can almost sense the love build. So nice to read. :)
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