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A Small Peach Tree

The emerald and still evening lures the crescent moon rising, to make a small peach tree shine as if it were already daytime; it even invites the brutal wind to lash it so that its flowers would lose their pretty petals... then one of them starts to descend, others sadly follow behind to resemble Autumn leaves... who has sympathy for a small peach tree which grieves? The enchanted, star-draped sky watches the white petals fall off the small peach tree into the lake that earlier reflected its flowery image; isn't it enraged by the wind's ravage? Its anger can last until the deep shadows wane and die: that's when the light will restore harmony. Written by Andrew Crisci for Gail Angel Doyle's contest, " Petals In The Wind " on 1/ 15/ 2012

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Date: 4/26/2013 9:53:00 PM
Andrew, lovely lovely imagery and emotion.
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Date: 2/3/2013 6:55:00 PM
andrew, it seems like ages since I visited you. I'm happy to see you on a winners list now and then so I can see your poetry. this one is unique in the way you told your nature story and you have described it beautifully. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/3/2013 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Andrew, sorry it's late xx
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Date: 2/2/2013 7:19:00 AM
Very creative and descriptive winning contest entry..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2013 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!! :)
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Date: 2/1/2013 3:00:00 PM
Truely excellent. Cant find anything else to say except that I love it. Congrats..BG
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:37:00 AM
A different take on the theme of Petals in the wind...but I like. How sad to see such beauty drop and float to the ground. Nature has her own ways..and recycling is one of them Excellent poetry...enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:18:00 PM
Andrew, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD
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Date: 1/31/2013 6:21:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/16/2013 10:44:00 AM
i like this Andrew, I used to grow peaches in my garden until a couple of years ago, when mega frost wiped them out. xx
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