A Slick Girl

She’s so slick a beautiful girl Sitting on a rock, solid stone She envisions dreams of the world Every sight breaks into her bone Enlightened she does stand upright She’s so slick a beautiful girl Timeless her beauty in the light Shines brighter than what is unfurled Water flows to her and her curl Covering her feet with wetness She’s so slick a beautiful girl Her demeanor is a kindness Her life spreads over these wet stones Seeing her makes you want to twirl Joy fills your heart with wondrous tones She’s so slick a beautiful girl
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/27/2020 8:51:00 AM
It's an excellent poem.... Great... I enjoyed really
Login to Reply
Date: 9/21/2013 6:17:00 PM
this is a cute and interesting poem. The imagery keeps the readers interest and curiosity. good job
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2012 12:16:00 AM
so enjoyed reading your fantastic words again Russell luv .. an amazing write to get me motivated again .. Ron has me on half hour segments on site till I am stronger my friend .. hope u had a grand Christmas and wishes for a blessed NY luv
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2012 8:46:00 PM
Russell, a beautiful thought,, SOme times kindness is the best and slickest way to anyone heart.. I like this poem.. and it's little flow... The way you described here, was lovely and perfect... always~pd
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2012 3:46:00 PM
Hello my friend, and this is a slick beautiful poem. Outstanding work Russell. Rollo
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2012 1:24:00 PM
very nice, Russell. I loved the part saying she demeanor is a kindness.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/26/2012 11:18:00 AM
Enjoyed the imagery. love, Mehnaz
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter