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A Sleepless Night Triolet

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A Sleepless Night Triolet

From Shakespeare’s Hamlet: "To sleep, perchance to dream-ay, there's the rub.” Perchance to dream. . . Ah yes, but first to sleep! My little clock keeps ticking on and on. I‘m long past even trying to count sheep. Perchance to dream. . . Ah, yes, but first to sleep! A creeping dread now makes me want to weep. Dawn’s coming; birds are trilling as I yawn. Perchance to dream? Ah yes. . . But first to sleep! My little clock keeps ticking on and on.

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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:59:00 PM
    Clever anecdote with Shakespeare as the muse...Your creativity is astounding. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Ah I love a girl who quotes Shakespeare enjoyed, and congrats xxx

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 12:44:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 9:08:00 AM
    This is a cute take on Shakespeare!! Congrats, Andrea!

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 8:16:00 AM
    This is so good, it has a dreamy quality even though there was no sleeping. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:06:00 AM
    wonderful write and win Andrea

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:34:00 AM
    love the tick-tock apppeal, andie.. super confrats on your fine win!.:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 10:22:00 PM
    My huge heartfelt congratulations on your great win my dear friend, Andrea. It’s an outstanding poem indeed which really deserved its shining win. Thank you so much for giving me your precious gem in my contest and for your support. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 9:01:00 AM
    great write andrea. truely i am learning new poetry variants from your write thank you

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 12:42:00 PM
    It seems you are having sleepless nights these days Andrea.In efbee I found you too early in the morning today:))

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Nicely done

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 3:57:00 PM
    Yes, I was awake at four AM , with headache. I sometimes get terrible migraines. Rose is a poem I wrote when I was bored ;} Your poem lingers with thoughts of Shakespeare ;}

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Excellent in all aspects! So many that I should not bore anyone with them. Rhyme and Rhythm are the most prominent, I believe. Therefore, to the faves!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:28:00 PM
    You have not only given a quote from Shakespeare but given a brilliant touch close to that of Shakespeare. Another Gem from your pen my friend with a good news that for all those who suffers from insomnia that some of the steps of Yaga which I am going to place here would be highly beneficial for them. I am placing the next step today and thank Andrea for your kind and lovely words. Love and best wishes....Ravindra

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 3:21:00 PM
    To wake without a blink of sleep. Is sheer madness that can make you weep. How do the God's expect production. When all their workers cant even function. I see I borrowed your rhyme weep with sleep. Oh well, I knew I heard it somewhere. :) Now go and get yourself a good nights rest.

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 6:08:00 PM
    I know the feeling all to well...wonderful read very enjoyable...well written:) Thankyou,,, cherie

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 1:12:00 PM
    you stun me, andie... like how you wove a contemporary feel into the bard's lines... amazing!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:34:00 AM
    Don't say I reccomend a few martinis before bed.

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:27:00 AM
    In my teens till mid twenties i used to have lots of sleepless nights..and yep I can relate to the yawning at dawn : )lovely post sweetie.

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:09:00 AM
    Wonderfully done!I know that feeling.Best wishes.

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