A Slaughtering of Fears

I am running fast,
A storm is rolling in,
Im running,
breathe,
my chest is heaving,
I dropped a tear,
on accident I swear,
I tried to wipe it quickly away,
But it was too late,
They'd seen,
Found weekness in my heart,
And so they came for me,
I stopped running, 
Turned to face those demons,
I slaughtered them all, 
and the looks on thier face I knew they could now tell,
the tear I dropped was for them, 
for sending them to hell,
that night I walked throught the storm,
no longer afraid, 
I wore the blood of the demons I'd just slayed,
and I'd never felt more proud,
coated with my accomplishment for the night , I smiled.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/2/2013 2:06:00 AM
This is just awesome joanns ;} too bad I didn't write it ;} have a great day.
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:43:00 AM
I would be smiling too if I had written this. Brilliant!
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Date: 3/2/2010 2:44:00 PM
I think that you have a very unique style. I love the imagery that you used, and i think this is one of your more vivid poems. I can really feel your words. Keep it up! : )
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Date: 2/11/2010 11:01:00 PM
Good write again. well done. Your stuff is enjoyable to read and thought provoking too. David
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Date: 2/11/2010 2:33:00 PM
Thats awesome, pure and brutal power.
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Date: 2/5/2010 8:04:00 AM
i really like this one. Nicely written :)
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Date: 1/18/2010 4:05:00 PM
thank you so much for your kindness. i read through some of your poems tonight and i really love your style. youre very honest and not afraid to explore the darker sides of life. i can't wait to read more from you as well =)
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Date: 1/14/2010 7:44:00 AM
I love the detail in this, when I was reading it I could see all of this happening. Its an interesting poem. -Echo
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Date: 1/8/2010 1:37:00 PM
I've already said this, but i really like how you put in every detail.
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Date: 1/8/2010 10:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Joanna. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/7/2010 11:33:00 PM
i like this poem it is prophetic and badass. keep it up nate..
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Date: 1/7/2010 1:31:00 PM
Very nice..enjoyed....Marty
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