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A Sentimental Letter To My Only True Love

My dearest, darling lover, Through this electronic medium I touch and caress you with my love As you read these my words to you Feel the tenderness of my lips upon your neck The aching of my breast, molded to your chest Stronger than the miles between us, is our love Stronger than the issues that separate us, is our love The vastness and continuity that envelopes our heart I now wait with longing, my darling, and sweetheart For the day, which seems to stretch each hour of the clock When we will be one, as we should have been, so long ago I need your touch, as the river needs the water to get along I have been incomplete without you my sweetest love I thirst for your loving, as the desert longs for the rain drops I wait, impatiently my love, with baited breath Watching that clock, which I have confounded for ticking too slowly For that day, that hour, that minute, that second, when you shall be mine All mine. I love you, so much, dearest, with everything that’s in me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/20/2012 12:42:00 PM
Hi Joy, i sincerely love you love in this complete empathical piece. Fisayo.
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Date: 11/22/2010 12:29:00 PM
Hi Joy, Amazing; I could feel the passion through your words! What a great gift to love in this way... = ) Lay
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:36:00 AM
Dear Joy, A double Congratulations, YOUR Win in Audrey's Contest and YOUR Featured Honor I have read all of David's JEW POEMS about YOU and am now reading Your POEMS about Him I wish YOU both the Blooming of YOUR LOVE " A LOVE ETERNAL, EVERLASTING " I know the Feelings LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege.. .HG
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Date: 11/10/2010 6:09:00 AM
thankxxx Joy .. appreciate your warm and welcome comments .. blessings and luv to u today .. and great poetry ..
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:39:00 AM
I want to thank everyone who took the time to read my write and to give a well appreciated comment. Thanks and good luck to all as we keep the soup pot boiling. One love. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joy in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:50:00 AM
Congrats Joy my friend on your big win in the love letters contest with this excellent entry depicting luv.. so special.. so enjoy this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Joy! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations ..Sara
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:08:00 AM
Excellent write and well deserved win Joy..Congrats
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:48:00 PM
Joy, congratulations on your win in Audrey's contest with this one straight from your heart. With love seeping through each line. Hope your weekend is a great one ~ love Wilma
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:34:00 PM
Dear Joy, Thank you for supporting my contest! Your heart speaks of the beautiful love it holds for your David! I enjoyed reading this very much! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations Joy on your second place win. Well deserved success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Joy
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Date: 11/5/2010 2:27:00 PM
Beautiful poem and so pure and rich with emotion. Congrats on being featured on the home page :) Best wishes
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:18:00 AM
So many great lines that express your love for David, Joy. My favorite is "I need your touch as the river needs water." That sums up the sentiments in your love letter so well! Wishing you success in Audrey's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:44:00 AM
I thank everyone who has commented on my write and took the time, even more so, to read. Much appreciated. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:34:00 AM
you have made a big hit on the suop!! YOu have been featured on the home page with this well deservinng poem.
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Date: 11/1/2010 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Joy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2010 8:55:00 AM
well written, joy.your love thoughts are very intense indeed.nice enjoyable lines.fabiyas
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Date: 11/1/2010 5:51:00 AM
Awesome entry, Joy. Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your kind words. Have a super week. xxxRalph
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Date: 10/31/2010 11:26:00 PM
lovely poem and good luck in the contest , re: your comments on "The first snowfall", its for a contest , we have definitely not had snow yet.
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Date: 10/31/2010 8:10:00 PM
congrats on being featured! :) I really enjoyed this poem it is so touching and sweet I wish you the best.
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Date: 10/31/2010 8:05:00 PM
Congrats Joy on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..
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Date: 10/31/2010 2:33:00 PM
it's tough when you have to tell time by the calender. while waiting is not measured by minutes but by weeks and months. we thank God for the internet our closest friend keeping us in touch with the touch of our hands. our words supply the needs we need so much to give. something for the heart, a reason to live.
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