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A Season's Dance

All seasons romp through nightfall, dawn, and rain With leaves prancing as breezes lead their way , A tango of summer glazes the spotlight When boughs display a fired tap to excite. Soon, autumn bares her petals in orange To foxtrot with the moon, sleek like curved trees Cascading on lanes robed in amber and gold A rhythmic glide that makes chilled buds unfold. Though winter mellows when snow meets the dark December spins a waltz, pacing her gait; Unlike springtime, raw fragrance in new bloom Wild rumba thrills high from a floral costume. Seasons bounce along tempos, each one rare Welcoming cycles filled with pirouettes Their symbol of thanks to God for nature’s dance; Oh dames of joy, bring moments of romance! A Season's Dance Contest, Gail Doyle by nette onclaud 10.8.13

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Date: 10/23/2013 1:15:00 PM
congrats Nette.. LOVE --SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:04:00 PM
Nette, love it...a wonderful win in Gail's "A Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 10/22/2013 9:59:00 PM
Excellent write, Nette! I like the way you used different dances with each of the seasons. Congrats your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 10/21/2013 1:04:00 PM
Beautiful, rhythmic words penned, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/21/2013 10:27:00 AM
Love it, Nette!
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Date: 10/20/2013 10:50:00 AM
Beautiful lines and imagery. Last line is my fave. congrats on your well deserved win
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:02:00 AM
Lovely and awesome piece...Great write,Nette..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...
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Date: 10/20/2013 8:52:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2013 9:42:00 PM
Simply lovely Nette. Congratulations on your no. 1 win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2013 7:49:00 PM
Your seasons are dancing like sugarplums throughout this beautiful poem!! Lovely work, Nette! Congrats to you!
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Date: 10/19/2013 4:36:00 PM
beautiful dance through words on pages, you paint the scene well...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/19/2013 4:20:00 PM
Well done Nette....Seren
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Date: 10/9/2013 2:10:00 PM
Wow Nette! You really know how to bring the words to life! I see you've been writing some rhymes lately... I will look forward to reading them as soon as I get the time. Thank you for stopping by with your comments on my song. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :o)
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Date: 10/8/2013 9:59:00 PM
Nicely done! My favorite line is, "to foxtrot with the moon." I love the way you've woven the dances together. Good luck in the contest... Jacck
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Date: 10/8/2013 9:33:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette! I love every line and the last stanza brought it all together perfectly...a winner for sure. Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/8/2013 2:24:00 PM
it was like a dance came together really beautiful
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Date: 10/8/2013 7:39:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your dancing lines..It soon will be full fledge fall here..Reads like a winner in the contest to me..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 10/7/2013 11:57:00 PM
Love this Nette!Wonderful imagery in this poem!
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Date: 10/7/2013 11:47:00 PM
This is such a beautiful and exciting write to read my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! You sure do know how to please my senses by your perfectly placed words Nette! What a glorious piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!
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