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A Season's Dance

Fall dances in with attitude, Determined to have his way. He's watching as Summer packs her bags, Making sure she does not delay. He begins at once to paint the leaves Of all the deciduous trees, And mixes the paint so expertly, His artistic side to please. He cavorts in Summer's garden And tosses the fading flowers. He invites the wind to enter in Along with some heavy showers. He twists into every corner Assuring nothing of Summer remains Then dances a happy Irish jig To welcome the chilly rains. The wind has reported on Winter, Who is steadily coming this way, So Fall dons his ballet slippers As he pirouettes away. By; Joyce Johnson 10/01/13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/23/2013 1:17:00 PM
lovely win Joyce.. LOVE --SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:06:00 PM
Joyce, , a wonderful win in Gail's "Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 10/21/2013 1:00:00 PM
Lovely words and flow, Joyce! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/20/2013 11:06:00 AM
Wonderful personification. Magical with a lovely flow. Congrats on the well deserved win.
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:43:00 AM
Beautifully done!! Congrats on your win. Betty
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:28:00 AM
Wonderful and lovely piece of work..Great write,Joyce...Congrats on your superb win in this contest..
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Date: 10/20/2013 8:49:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/20/2013 5:16:00 AM
beautiful write....congrats on your win
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Date: 10/19/2013 4:43:00 PM
what a gem of a poem you have crafted....lovely, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/6/2013 5:11:00 PM
Wow!!!!! Am so glad to hear from you. Your comments were uplifting. Am most humbled and honoured ma. A wonderful write! Kudos. Love and hugs!
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Date: 10/6/2013 1:12:00 AM
You did a great job with the theme One of the better ones I have been reading!! well done, Joyce.
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Date: 10/2/2013 8:36:00 AM
beautiful pen picture with apt similes and metaphors, Joyce
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